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See the bottom of this newsletter for information on how to subscribe, unsubscribe, or contact the editors. ***************************************************************** IN THIS ISSUE: ================================================================= THE NEWSLETTER EDITOR'S DESK: Procrastination Time Over, by Dawn Copeman THE WRITING DESK: Rejection, by Moira Allen NEWS FROM THE WORLD OF WRITING WRITING JOBS AND OPPORTUNITIES FEATURE: Letters of Introduction, by Denene Brox THE WRITE SITES -- Online Resources for Writers WRITING CONTESTS WITH NO ENTRY FEES The Author's Bookshelf ***************************************************************** EARN AN MFA IN WRITING through the brief-residency program at Spalding University in Louisville, KY. Call (800) 896-8941x2423 or email mfa@spalding.edu and request brochure FA90. For more info: http://www.spalding.edu/mfa ***************************************************************** WRITERSCOLLEGE.COM has 57 online courses. Prices are low. If you can reach our web site, you can take our courses. http://www.WritersCollege.com ***************************************************************** WRITE CHILDREN'S BOOKS. Break into this $3 billion market. Learn the secrets from an experienced professional. Online or by mail. Free writing test. http://www.writingforchildren.com/G6926 ***************************************************************** You CAN Make a Great Full-Time Living As a Writer! Once you know the simple secrets of writing for this little-known lucrative market. You can work from home, be in control of your schedule and earn an average of $75-$150 an hour. http://www.thewriterslife.com/a69/full-time-living ***************************************************************** THOUSANDS OF WRITERS USE FANSTORY.COM FOR: * Feedback. Get feedback for every poem and story that you write. * Contests. Over 40 contests are always open and free to enter. * Rankings. Statistics will show you how your writing is doing. http://www.fanstory.com/index1.jsp?at=38 ***************************************************************** FROM THE NEWSLETTER EDITOR'S DESK ================================================================ Procrastination Time Over ------------------------- In her last editorial Moira wrote about how one of my editorials inspired her to get submitting again; I wish it had had the same effect on me. I was, like so many of us, full of good intentions; I started looking in more detail at "Calls for Submissions," I read my Writer's Market and made notes on possible new markets. I thought of new ideas whilst washing-up or vacuuming and determined to sit down later and start working on them. All well and good, except that the working on them bit didn't ever happen. Not that I don't write; heavens I do, but not as much as I could. I had seemed to have settled down into doing my monthly writing work and some pieces of copywriting and spending far, far too long thinking about the novel I want to write and about articles I could write, if only I could find the time; yeah, that old excuse! But having just had a very pleasant two-week vacation in Ancient Rome, Ancient Greece and Ancient Egypt, courtesy of my host Marcus Didius Falco, the hero in Lindsey Davies' excellent crime stories, which I re-read whilst on a staycation, I have decided that the time of procrastination has to end. Feeling fully refreshed after a fortnight away from the internet, I now understand why my earlier passion had subsided and why submitting is harder now than it used to be. I was suffering from 'regular income' syndrome. I fear that when we get regular writing jobs, jobs that we had to struggle to get, we let down our guard and relax just a little too much. I believe that the prospect of regular income from our scribblings lessens the competitive streak in us and makes it too easy to stop submitting, to stop coming up with new ideas and to stop stretching ourselves. This lulls us into a false sense of security. This, for writers, is dangerous. Magazines close, editors move on and suddenly you're out of work. But also, if we don't keep stretching, keep pushing ourselves, keep pushing back the borders of our writing lives, then we can become stale, outmoded and unemployable. I have now, in Moira's words, "stuck my butt to the chair and my fingers to the keyboard." Articles that were ideas are now being developed, queries are being written and submitted. For me, the dangerous time of procrastination is over. I know as a writer that I cannot afford to stick with what I have been doing. 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Available from Amazon.com. http://www.crickhollowbooks.com/love_to_write_book.html ***************************************************************** THE WRITING DESK - Rejection, by Moira Allen ================================================================= Q: What are the 3-5 main reasons you reject query letters or proposals? A: The primary reason would be that the query or proposal is inappropriate for the publication. It amazes me to receive, say, a query on "natural treatments for cancer" for a writing publication. Lots of folks just send out queries "broadcast" to any e-mail they can get hold of. I honestly have no patience with that kind of "writer" -- it's unprofessional, and I don't feel any need to be "nice". The next reason would be that the writer does know what the publication is about, but still hasn't written an appropriate query. This is a basic amateur mistake: Lots of writers focus on writing about themselves, their personal experiences, etc., and don't realize that this type of material has very limited appeal. So I'll get lots of queries from someone who wants to write about "my first sale" or "how I overcame my fear of rejection," etc. (The same was true at Dog Fancy -- the majority of inexperienced writers simply sent in stories about "my pet", rather than the type of "how-to" material that the magazine could use.) I regard this type of writer as well meaning and possibly likely to do better in the future -- and this is a place we may all have been at one time or another. I let these writers know that I rarely use personal experience pieces, and let it go at that. The third reason is if a query reflects extremely poor writing skills. If I receive something riddled with misspellings, I'm not likely to want to see the article. However, I also take into consideration why the writing may be poor. For example, I do have an international section, and I encourage writers from other countries, for whom English may not be a first language, to contribute. However, if English is the writer's first language, I like to see some evidence that they know how to use it. The fourth reason is a little more difficult -- someone sends me a query that is appropriate, well-written, and interesting -- but somehow, I just can't get excited. It's very hard to put a finger on why a query like that doesn't result in a sale. The author has done everything "right" -- but somehow, the query may be flat, and I'm not motivated to ask for the article. It's really hard to explain how the query could be better! The fifth reason would be that the query is perfect, but I've already bought/assigned something similar, so I can't use it. In that case, I do strongly encourage the writer to try again. Q: What are the 3-5 main reasons you reject manuscripts? A: The first two reasons would be the same as for the previous question: Totally inappropriate, or just not what I use. I WILL accept a piece that is poorly written if it contains excellent information, but those are pretty rare. Then there are pieces that are almost good but not quite. Some of the problems I see with articles are: 1) The writer doesn't ask the questions the reader would ask. If, for example, the writer is submitting an article on "how to write a romance novel," the writer needs to ask him/herself, "what would the reader want to know about this process?" Many writers just jot down a bunch of odds and ends from their own knowledge, but they don't stop to ask what the reader would want to now. 2) The writer doesn't explain how to do something. I see a lot of what I call "explaining the importance of, but" articles. For example, a writer will explain that it's "very important" to write good beginnings -- but will not explain HOW to write a good beginning. My response is, "don't tell me WHY I should do this, tell me HOW to do it." 3) The material isn't organized. Some writers have good material, but it's scattered all over the place. I just don't feel like trying to piece it back together. 4) The article isn't interesting. Some pieces have good information, but they are just plain dull. It's very hard to explain how the piece could be made "better." (Those are hard to reject -- I don't want to say, "Hey, I didn't take it because it was boring.") I am also getting to the point where I am going to start sending back material that is sent by e-mail and contains all sorts of glitches and doodlies, because the writer hasn't bothered to turn off or take out smart quotes, hard dashes, ellipses, etc. By now, there is enough information out there on how to format material for electronic transmission to avoid this sort of thing, and I just don't have time to try to go through and correct all the problems. Similarly, if I receive a Word attachment that has smart quotes, hard dashes, formatting codes, etc., I'm going to start sending these back and saying "please fix this so that it can be posted online." I don't ask people to HTML their own work, but I do ask that it be "ready for posting." Copyright (c) 2009 Moira Allen ***************************************************************** TAKE COMMAND OF YOUR NOVEL--Bring a Novelist's Boot Camp to your writing group! As featured at RWA National, Love is Murder Mystery Con, RT, Duckcon SF Convention, and many more! Full- and half-day workshops available. Find out more at http://www.storytellerroad.com/Classes.htm ***************************************************************** FREE Article-Writing Course Orientation Taught by 35-year veteran writer and author Patricia Fry. Learn how to establish an article-writing career. Promote your nonfiction book through magazine articles. 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Speaking of the books that had not made the shortlist, the judges admitted that some were bad and one was 'a stinker.' The favourite for the £50,000 prize is Wolf Hall by Hilary Mantel, a novel set in the time of Henry VIII. For more on this story visit: http://tinyurl.com/mkpgu6 Copyright Office Attacks Google Settlement as Unfair ---------------------------------------------------- In the latest twist in the case of the disputed Google Settlement, Marybeth Peters, the United States register of copyrights, gave evidence to the House Judiciary Committee and attacked the settlement. She said that the settlement would in effect end the effectiveness of copyright law and enable Google to take control of author's works without the author's permission. For more on this story visit: http://tinyurl.com/lo3zz3 **************************************************************** CROSSxCHECKING: Editor with over 10 years experience with online publications! Critiques of writing strengths and weaknesses - readings & exercises - line/copyedits. Don't take our word for it. Read one of our critiques at http://crossxchecking. **************************************************************** UNPUBLISHED GUY - *Nearly serious* diversions for writers. Whether you are a casual or more active writer, this site will ease you into the writing mindset with a healthy dose of educational schadenfreude. http://www.UnpublishedGuy.com ***************************************************************** WRITING JOBS AND OPPORTUNITIES French Property News Seeking Articles ------------------------------------- French Property News welcomes pitches for French property-related articles, articles on living in France and location features including property market review. Fees: £100 per 1,000 words, to include photos. Send outlines to karen.tait@archant.co.uk. For more information, visit http://www.french-property-news.com Mental Floss Wants Writers -------------------------- Mental Floss is on the lookout for new writers for their intelligent magazine. Be sure you read back issues first to get the measure of their style and to check that your article idea hasn't already been run. To find out how to submit your ideas visit: http://www.mentalfloss.com/magazine/submissions.php Sweet Magazine Needs Features on Diabetes ----------------------------------------- UK based Sweet is a modern, lively, independent magazine about all aspects of diabetes and healthy living. They welcome article proposals on real-life experiences as well as articles from a professional perspective. Send outlines to the editor. View website for contact details. http://www.sweetmagazine.org/index.html Suite101 is Recruiting New Writers ---------------------------------- The site is looking for new and experienced freelance writers to join their team and to write about whatever subjects they feel passionate about. They offer lifetime royalties and the chance to build up a reputation in a field. http://www.suite101.com/freelance_writing_jobs/ ***************************************************************** ENGLISH SOFTWARE provides an all-in-one English writing and grammar check solution that checks for grammar, spelling or punctuation mistakes. Improve your writing style, check your documents for even more complicated sentence structuring mistakes and start to write like an English expert, right now! http://www.englishsoftware.org **************************************************************** FEATURE: Using Letters of Introduction to Land Assignments with Trade Publications ================================================================= By Denene Brox Many writers think that in order to write for magazines you have to write great query letters outlining a catchy idea. But if you want to land assignments without having to query, using letters of introduction (LOI) is something that you can easily add to your marketing plan today. So what exactly is a LOI and how can writers use it to land assignments with magazines? A LOI is a simple letter introducing yourself, your expertise, and your writing availability to editors. Now, before you get overly excited about sending your LOI to an editor at a top glossy publication like Glamour or The New Yorker, I must point out that LOIs work best with industry trade publications (publications targeted to readers in certain industries). Perhaps there are a few writers who have broken into the majors without querying the editor with a specific idea, but those cases are just as rare as winning the lottery. The competition is too steep, and those editors are bombarded with too many query letters to throw assignments to writers who submit a LOI. I realize that trade pubs aren't as glamorous as the glossies. But, if you're looking to build clips and make money, they are great in many ways. A lot of trades offer decent pay and don't require as much legwork on your part. I once sent an e-mail LOI to an editor at a trade, and a couple of weeks later she offered me two assignments with her publication, each paying several hundred dollars. Not bad for a writer who didn't have any major credits, and up until then had made a whopping $25 per article! I took the assignments and collected my first big check. On the flip side, I once spent many hours crafting the perfect query letter for a nutrition article for a major news-stand glossy. The editor expressed interest in the pitch, but wanted some revisions to the idea. I was so excited to have the attention of a New York City editor that I went to work perfecting the query. I spent hours revising it to meet her specifications and sent it off to her, certain that I'd land the assignment. You can imagine my disappointment when she ultimately rejected the pitch. What did I get for the hours I spent working on that pitch? Nothing, zero, nada! (To make for a happier ending, I eventually sold the idea to another newsstand magazine, so all wasn't wasted. But my story does illustrate the relative ease that a LOI can bring a writer.) When I first started with trades, I focused on industries where I had relevant work experience. Since I only had a couple of clips from my college reporting days to show to trade editors, I relied on my experience in the workforce to get my foot in the door. The logical place for me to start was with trades that focused on financial services. Having worked in the retail banking industry for five years, I played up my experience in banking -- and landed a few assignments. Below is an example of how I used a LOI to break into financial publications: Date: November 18, 2005 To: Editor@trademagazine.com From: Denene Brox Subject: Writing for Financial Trade Magazine Dear Mr. Editor (Remember to always find out the editor's name), My name is Denene Brox and I'm a freelance writer based in the Kansas City area. I am writing to inquire about freelance writing opportunities with Financial Trade Magazine. I've written for numerous publications including Kansas City Magazine and Transitions Abroad. I am available for work-for-hire assignments, and I'd also be happy to come up with a few article ideas if you prefer to receive pitches from writers. In addition to my writing experience, I have five years of experience working in the retail banking industry. Can I e-mail you some clips? I'd be happy to send you PDF attachments of my work. Mr. Editor, I look forward to working with you. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely, Denene Brox Notice how I said that I've written for "numerous" publications. I didn't mention the fact that I only had a few clips. I also played up my industry experience to show that I have background knowledge in banking. I got several editor responses to this e-mail and eventually landed assignments with a banking trade publication. You can use a similar approach to break into trades. What industries do you have work experience in? You can play up everything from working in fast food to manufacturing. What was your major in college? Whether you majored in engineering, business, or basket weaving, there are trade magazines that focus on just about every industry. Mine your life and get creative. If you have no clips, don't mention clips at all. Just state your relevant work, or other experience. My experience in banking ultimately helped me launch my writing business! If you don't have any clips, don't worry. Remember to play up your related experience. If you're pitching a trade devoted to elementary school teachers, be sure to mention your work with your child's PTA. Here are some tips and resources for locating and contacting editors at trade publications: Buy or check out a copy of the latest Writer's Market. This thick resource book provides market information on all aspects of the publishing industry -- from book agents and publishers to trade and consumer magazines. There is a section especially for trades that's organized by industry. Read the guidelines for the publications you'd like to pitch, and pay extra attention to those that state "work-for-hire." This means that the editor(s) assign stories to freelancers without the writer having to pitch story ideas. Pitch ideas. Just because a lot of trade publications don't require you to query with an idea doesn't mean you shouldn't come up with any. Feel free to approach the editor with a well written query if you do have a good idea that fits the publication. Locate trade publications by visiting http://www.TradePub.com. There you will find dozens of trade publications that you can potentially write for. Use your Writer's Market and the Internet to locate contact information for editors. Writer's Market is a good start, but be sure to double check by going to the publication's Web site or calling the publication. I have found that the editor's names and e-mail addresses are easy to locate online. E-mail your LOI to trade editors. I have received quick responses from my LOIs. Most of the editors say they will keep my information on file (in which case I follow up several months later to remind them about me), and other times they have written back with assignments. That's gold! Keep records of which editors you approach. You don't want to send an editor your LOI more than once because you didn't remember that you already approached him/her. Personalize your LOIs (and queries). Use the editor's name and play up your experience that relates to the publication's focus. Sending LOIs can help you get a steady roster of clients for your writing business while you focus on sending queries to editors at the majors. >>--------------------------------------------------<< Denene Brox is a professional freelance writer and author of the e-book, "The Weekend Writer: Launch Your Freelance Writing Career (Part-Time)." Her work has appeared in more than 20 publications and web sites including Heart & Soul, Minority Nurse, Community Banker, MyBusiness, QSR, and Yahoo! HotJobs. Visit her online at http://www.WeekendWriter.net Copyright (c) 2009 by Denene Brox For more information on writing for trade magazines check out the following links: http://www.writing-world.com/tech/trade.shtml http://www.writing-world.com/tech/realestate.shtml **************************************************************** WRITE FOR MAGAZINES! Order your copy of the eBook "The Weekend Writer: Launch Your Writing Career (Part-time)" for only $11.99. You'll learn to write query letters, juggle writing with other work, & secrets from other weekend writers. Visit http://www.weekendwriter.net to order. 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This is no-fee membership site which has a monthly, instructional newsletter, access to interactive Query Wizard chats, successful queries, evaluated queries, and best of all, a complimentary 31-page query letter, mini-workbook. http://queryclub.weebly.com/ Shewrites --------- Following on from last issue's Inquiring Writer question about social networking sites, we've come across this one for women writers. http://www.shewrites.com/ ***************************************************************** CAN'T GET PUBLISHED? Be a Well-Fed Self-Publisher and make a living! Control the process and timetable. Keep the rights AND most of the profits. Here's the step-by-step blueprint used to create a full-time living from ONE book! By the award-winning author of The Well-Fed Writer. http://www.wellfedsp.com ***************************************************************** WRITING CONTESTS ================================================================= This section lists contests that charge no entry fees. Unless otherwise indicated, competitions are open to all adult writers. For a guide to more than 1000 writing contests throughout the world, see Moira Allen's book, "Writing to Win: The Colossal Guide to Writing Contests" (http://www.writing-world.com/bookstore/index.shtml). GUIDE GECKO WRITING CONTEST --------------------------- DEADLINE: September 24, 2009 GENRE: Nonfiction DETAILS: Write and publish your own Gecko Guide on the site. The one that is voted the best by readers wins. PRIZE: 1st - Trip to Frankfurt Book Fair, 2nd Your Guide will be presented at the Frankfurt Book Fair. URL: http://www.guidegecko.com/writing-contest HAPPY TALES LITERARY CONTEST ---------------------------- DEADLINE: October 15, 2009 GENRE: Short stories DETAILS: Write an alternate happy and humorous ending (in the style of the original) for any tragic literary work. Maximum 10 double-spaced pages. PRIZE: $200 and the "prestigious" Nahum Tate Cup. URL: http://www.humanitiesmontana.org/BookFestival/happytales.shtml NEW VOICES WRITING CONTEST -------------------------- DEADLINE: October 20, 2009 GENRE: Young Writers OPEN TO: Students worldwide, attending public, private, or home schools. Students must be in junior high/middle school or high school in the U.S., or the equivalent grade level in their specific international school system. DETAILS: Entries may be a story, poem, or essay, written specifically for the contest or as a school assignment for grades 6-8 / ages 11 - 14 (Middle School categories) or grades 9-12 / ages 15 - 18 (High School categories). The sub-categories are Story (fictional Short Story), Poetry, and/or Essay (nonfiction). See website for age ranges and word limits per age range and category. PRIZE: $100 URL: http://newvoicesyoungwriters.com/enter.html RTE RADIO SHORT STORY CONTEST ------------------------------- DEADLINE: October 26, 2009 GENRE: Short Stories OPEN TO: Writers born or living in Ireland. DETAILS: 1,800 - 2000 words short fiction suitable for performance eon the radio. PRIZE: €3000, €2000. €1000 URL: http://www.rte.ie/radio1/francismacmanus/ ERIC GREGORY AWARDS ------------------- DEADLINE: October 31, 2009 GENRE: Poetry OPEN TO: British subjects by birth who reside in the UK or Northern Ireland and will be under age 30 as of March 31 of next year. DETAILS: Poetry, verse-drama, or belles letters. Maximum of 30 poems; may have been previously published elsewhere. PRIZE: £24,000 in total, average of £4000 per winning poet. 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